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Sanzaru

29 Sep

3monkeys

 

Outside the bar:

“Who threw the first punch?”

“I couldn’t see, Officer,” said Mizaru.

“What was the argument about?”

“Didn’t hear it,” claimed Kikazaru.

“Which way did they run?”

“Couldn’t say,” apologized Iwazaru.

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Thirty-three words for this weekend’s Trifextra challenge about a famous trio from literature, history, or pop culture.

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10 Comments

Posted by on September 29, 2013 in Challenges, Fiction, Sunday Best

 

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10 responses to “Sanzaru

  1. tmwhickman (@fercryinoutloud)

    September 29, 2013 at 3:48 PM

    Very clever! I love this!

     
  2. pratibha

    September 29, 2013 at 3:54 PM

    This is creative. Well done!

     
  3. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

    September 29, 2013 at 4:09 PM

    Had to google that… but it’s brilliant.

     
  4. Jo-Anne Teal (@jtvancouver)

    September 29, 2013 at 6:54 PM

    Unique and oh so clever!!!

     
  5. jannatwrites

    September 29, 2013 at 11:54 PM

    This was an original take on the prompt. Nicely done!

     
  6. Christine

    September 30, 2013 at 12:40 AM

    Love this! A perfect response to the prompt, and a great little story.

     
  7. Draug419

    September 30, 2013 at 12:45 AM

    This is clever.

     
  8. atrm61

    September 30, 2013 at 3:16 AM

    Ah,that’s where Gandhiji’s 3 monkeys came from?Wow!Cool take:-)

     
  9. Ivy (Mommy Dourest)

    September 30, 2013 at 6:59 AM

    Haha! LOVE this. Excellent take on the prompt.

     
  10. trifectawriting

    September 30, 2013 at 9:43 AM

    Very nicely done. Intelligent and funny. Great job. Thanks for linking.

     

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