29 Sep



Outside the bar:

“Who threw the first punch?”

“I couldn’t see, Officer,” said Mizaru.

“What was the argument about?”

“Didn’t hear it,” claimed Kikazaru.

“Which way did they run?”

“Couldn’t say,” apologized Iwazaru.


Thirty-three words for this weekend’s Trifextra challenge about a famous trio from literature, history, or pop culture.


Posted by on September 29, 2013 in Challenges, Fiction, Sunday Best



10 responses to “Sanzaru

  1. tmwhickman (@fercryinoutloud)

    September 29, 2013 at 3:48 PM

    Very clever! I love this!

  2. pratibha

    September 29, 2013 at 3:54 PM

    This is creative. Well done!

  3. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

    September 29, 2013 at 4:09 PM

    Had to google that… but it’s brilliant.

  4. Jo-Anne Teal (@jtvancouver)

    September 29, 2013 at 6:54 PM

    Unique and oh so clever!!!

  5. jannatwrites

    September 29, 2013 at 11:54 PM

    This was an original take on the prompt. Nicely done!

  6. Christine

    September 30, 2013 at 12:40 AM

    Love this! A perfect response to the prompt, and a great little story.

  7. Draug419

    September 30, 2013 at 12:45 AM

    This is clever.

  8. atrm61

    September 30, 2013 at 3:16 AM

    Ah,that’s where Gandhiji’s 3 monkeys came from?Wow!Cool take:-)

  9. Ivy (Mommy Dourest)

    September 30, 2013 at 6:59 AM

    Haha! LOVE this. Excellent take on the prompt.

  10. trifectawriting

    September 30, 2013 at 9:43 AM

    Very nicely done. Intelligent and funny. Great job. Thanks for linking.


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